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Mosquito Prompts

lengthy thin needle
ingests blood to produce eggs~
inflicts pathogen

Aug17, 2020

Placed 5th in the contest.
Note: Haiku-Nature themed 2, poetry contest.
Sponsored by Tania kitchen.

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Rama Balasubramanian

August 27, 2020 at 3:19 AM

Just dropped in to see what you had written. Unique and creative write with great imagery. Heartiest congratulations to you too on a well deserved win.

V. Deepa

August 28, 2020 at 2:53 AM

Oh..Thankyou very much for your kind visit and soulful appreciation.:-) Have a beautiful day.Take care.Much love ~Deepa:-)

Eve Roper

August 22, 2020 at 8:32 PM

Congratulations on your win, Deepa, great imagery. Hugs Eve

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 2:42 AM

Thankyou for the kind appreciation dear Eve mam.:-).. Pleased to know that you liked my work.Take care.Much love:-)

Sigrid Ermine

August 22, 2020 at 4:34 PM

Full on! A clever Haiku! Action, pain, magnified movement. Congratulations on Win!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 2:40 AM

Thankyou for the beautiful review and appreciation always.. :-) Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa.

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2020 at 1:33 PM

Great title and imagery, V. Congrats in the contest.

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 2:39 AM

Thankyou Andrea mam for your continuous support and encouraging words.:-) Take care.Much love..

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2020 at 12:29 PM

V. Deepa, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever haiku!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 2:38 AM

Thankyou dear Tania mam for the kind appreciation and support.:-) Am glad you liked it.Take care.With love ~Deepa:-)

Sam Kauffman

August 22, 2020 at 12:16 PM

Nature's disease carrying vampires! Well penned, Deepa! Nice to see this on the winners list. Congratulations!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 2:37 AM

Thankyou mam for the kind appreciation:-) Yes ,they are vampires..!! Take care.Much love.:-)

Vijay Pandit

August 18, 2020 at 5:34 AM

You described them well, Deepa--they are always hungry for blood. All the best to you.

V. Deepa

August 18, 2020 at 6:04 AM

Yes, Vijay sir .. Everyday they enjoy variety..;-) Thankyou for your lovely feedback always.Best wishes for you too.:-) Have a bright day..!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 17, 2020 at 3:46 PM

Hello Deepa, the mosquitos like me. I always get bitten by them. enjoy your evening my friend. Much love. Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 18, 2020 at 11:37 AM

Hello Deepa, Oh i do not want to be loved by the mosquito. Yes I will protect myself from their bites.Yes i am doing well thank you. i hope that you are to. Take care . Much love Darlene

V. Deepa

August 18, 2020 at 2:37 AM

Hello Darlene mam, Oh...that means you are too sweet to be loved by them.:-) But ,please protect yourself from being bitten. I believe you are doing well..!! Have a wonderful day.Take care. Much love sent to you:-)

Alkas Poetry

August 17, 2020 at 6:45 AM

In the past i chased plenty mosquitos in the night.. we here call them muriçocas ! salute, alkas

V. Deepa

August 18, 2020 at 2:34 AM

Hello Alkas sir, Thankyou for the kind visit and your lovely compliment.:-) I can understand the difficulty of chasing them;-) Oh..you call them Muriçocas?!. Thankyou for teaching me this word.Keep sharing your knowledge & keep inspiring us.:-) Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa:-)