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Mosquito Bite

I took an oath from thy God’s face
That life dwelling on earth I raise
Cuddle what breathes in this thick case
But you that slurp my red
Deserve no love nor an embrace
Slap! You die yet I bled.




© Glenn L. Sentes
July 4, 2011

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Arnold Mutugi

July 13, 2011 at 5:55 AM

You should pay a visit to Africa. I will show you mosquitoes that bite without hurting. They are very skilful because you cannot slap them successfully. Nice poem

Doris Culverhouse

July 10, 2011 at 5:45 PM

I love it....I wrote a poem on mosquitoes once....it is on the soup.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

July 9, 2011 at 12:26 PM

SPLATT! :)

Tasha Wright

July 5, 2011 at 11:52 PM

Thanks for your comment :) I like this. Short but really to the point. Love it!

Don Johnson

July 4, 2011 at 3:44 PM

gotta watch dem mossie buggers , slap em down slap to lugger,(ear) great verse mate, Don

Jancarl Campi

July 4, 2011 at 2:54 PM

Hmm an interesting poem. Good luck in the contest. Jancarl

Judy Ball

July 4, 2011 at 10:25 AM

Oh I do so agree my friend. I bled and so she dies. Good job here God Bless, JB

Nette Onclaud

July 4, 2011 at 9:14 AM

nice to meet you, glenn... a powerful write! greeat stuff... ; ) hugggs,nette

Robert A. Dufresne

July 4, 2011 at 9:09 AM

well done, Glen and those buggers make you suffer even after they die! good write . Good luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 4, 2011 at 8:30 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Glenn. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Glenn Sentes

July 4, 2011 at 8:48 AM

Thanks to you, Ms. Carol! I regret that I only got to learn about PS last night! Stumbling upon you guys is a blessing! I love PS! God bless us all!

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