Notes About The Poem

MOSAICS

migraine

   mosaics
sensations
          in the eye

under 
       zig-zag
lines

words
missing
     on my page


       leaping jumping
back & forth
in
  rhythmic
            visuals

interactions
   slow         
then
       interpolate
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Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Yes, this one is a jumping and leaping one. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Oh, I can relate in your poem my dear poet friend, Brian. I love your unique bio poem and how well you described this horrible feeling like mosaic. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed this gem so much. Hope you're well and at the zenith of good health. God bless you and your loved ones always. Thanks also for my win in your contest. Hugs
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