Mosaic Sky

Painted pearly clouds,
Blended with evening pastels;
Iridescent scene.

naturehaiku

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Joanne Carty

Date: 6/3/2009 6:53:00 AM

I can see the beauty! thanks

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/31/2009 2:20:00 PM

Lovely picture you painted! Laura :)

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/28/2009 10:50:00 AM

pretty. Jese

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/27/2009 10:05:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery Raul. It's a poem - it's a painting - it's both!

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/27/2009 10:05:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery Raul. It's a poem - it's a painting - it's both!

Diane Christian

Date: 5/26/2009 8:13:00 AM

a beautiful poem, I love the way you use your poems to show and to express Gods beauty in everything around us, I can see him shine in most things you write, God bless you from diane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 7:55:00 AM

Put the pen down, you need a canvas ... gosh ... Raul you are being transcendent

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/26/2009 7:41:00 AM

I just want to be there and see it. Too lovely to miss! Love, Shar