Mosaic Sky

Painted pearly clouds, Blended with evening pastels; Iridescent scene.

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Joanne Carty

Date: 6/3/2009 6:53:00 AM

I can see the beauty! thanks

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/31/2009 2:20:00 PM

Lovely picture you painted! Laura :)

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/28/2009 10:50:00 AM

pretty. Jese

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/27/2009 10:05:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery Raul. It's a poem - it's a painting - it's both!

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/27/2009 10:05:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery Raul. It's a poem - it's a painting - it's both!

Diane Christian

Date: 5/26/2009 8:13:00 AM

a beautiful poem, I love the way you use your poems to show and to express Gods beauty in everything around us, I can see him shine in most things you write, God bless you from diane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 7:55:00 AM

Put the pen down, you need a canvas ... gosh ... Raul you are being transcendent

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/26/2009 7:41:00 AM

I just want to be there and see it. Too lovely to miss! Love, Shar

Date: 5/25/2009 2:13:00 PM

Beautiful view. Good use of imagery for an enjoyable read. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/25/2009 1:54:00 PM

i love your mosaic sky my friend--a work of art--charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/25/2009 11:57:00 AM

Love the picture this puts to mind !! :)

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/25/2009 11:17:00 AM

Hi Raul - Very beautiful imagery in this haiku - God bless, MJ

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/25/2009 10:48:00 AM

Loving this Haiku.Went right in my Favz*

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/25/2009 10:22:00 AM

Beautiful piece master! - eduardo

P Sheart

Date: 5/25/2009 10:21:00 AM

Hi Raul What a beautiful picture you paint! Truly enjoyed. Happy Memorial Day, Love Light Truth Patricia

James Fraser

Date: 5/25/2009 10:19:00 AM

The ease of your easel, is the flow of your pen, nice write Raul,James

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/25/2009 10:14:00 AM

This canvas was painted with magic my friend..you have the gift...Thanks for the love on my work Raul.

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/25/2009 10:13:00 AM

a beautiful portrayed picture strong imagery here nice work as usual