Mosaic Sky

Painted pearly clouds,
Blended with evening pastels;
Iridescent scene.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Carty Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 6:53 AM
I can see the beauty! thanks
Mckenzie Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Lovely picture you painted! Laura :)
Loveless Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 10:50 AM
pretty. Jese
Curcio Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Gorgeous imagery Raul. It's a poem - it's a painting - it's both!
Curcio Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Gorgeous imagery Raul. It's a poem - it's a painting - it's both!
Christian Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:13 AM
a beautiful poem, I love the way you use your poems to show and to express Gods beauty in everything around us, I can see him shine in most things you write, God bless you from diane
Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Put the pen down, you need a canvas ... gosh ... Raul you are being transcendent
Winter Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:41 AM
I just want to be there and see it. Too lovely to miss! Love, Shar
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May 25, 2009 at 2:13 PM
Beautiful view. Good use of imagery for an enjoyable read. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Chircop Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 1:54 PM
i love your mosaic sky my friend--a work of art--charma
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 11:57 AM
Love the picture this puts to mind !! :)
Jordan Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Hi Raul - Very beautiful imagery in this haiku - God bless, MJ
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Loving this Haiku.Went right in my Favz*
Orozco Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Beautiful piece master! - eduardo
Sheart Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Hi Raul What a beautiful picture you paint! Truly enjoyed. Happy Memorial Day, Love Light Truth Patricia
Fraser Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:19 AM
The ease of your easel, is the flow of your pen, nice write Raul,James
Higgins Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:14 AM
This canvas was painted with magic my friend..you have the gift...Thanks for the love on my work Raul.
Megens Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:13 AM
a beautiful portrayed picture strong imagery here nice work as usual
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