Mosaic

MOSAIC montage of squares shapes and broken pieces medley of colors reflect their individual hues mixture of distinctive well defined to ambiguity mapping fragments the artist crafts His design malevolence carefully chipped away flawlessly magnanimous with grace creates His masterpiece © October 2013—Kim van Breda

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2015 3:21:00 PM

Kim, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2015 7:09:00 PM

Kim, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*

Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/24/2015 9:51:00 PM

Thank you. It was unexpected .. but appreciated xx~xx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2015 1:57:00 PM

absolutely beautiful imagery Kim congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/21/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan.. I wouldn't have known if I got a placing if it were not for your comment. I very seldom enter competitions...but threw in a whole bunch recently after a long absence on the soup. xx~xx

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/20/2013 1:37:00 AM

This is elegant and filled me up. I've always loved the mosaic, and this poem afforded some more pleasant moments in its company.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/1/2013 10:36:00 AM

Brilliant the way you structured the first word of every line to create the poetic vision of Mosaic. Well done. Very much enjoyed the creativity :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/30/2013 6:44:00 AM

I am amazed at how sculpters manage to create the art that that do...To me it's the most challanging and difficult form of art there is...You have sculpted a masterpiece here Kim - Tim

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/29/2013 9:35:00 AM

This is a very pretty write my friend, one of beauty and lovely design! I loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What a glorious piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/29/2013 9:45:00 AM

Thanks Russell-- your compliments are really meaningful.