Notes About The Poem
Total of Syllables: 70
Total of lines: 7
Total of words: 35
Mortal Transgressions
A scornful attitude towards others
Inordinate in longing for status
Concuspicent of the carnal desires
Evoke wrath in ideas responses
Overindulging in consuming foods
Copying the traits and abilities
Showing laziness in the own duties
1-19-2016
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