Morningstar Visions (Part 8)

Folded waterfalls
Blue-vertexed sound waves flow
Dead spheres glowing roads
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Like this sequence haku Cesar.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Hickman Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 11:49 PM
very full of rich images, written very well,,,blessings..Cecil
Chircop Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 2:45 PM
this is wonderful,im glad my fingertips led me here--charma
Higgins Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 5:24 AM
Wow...the second line is awesome..wow..very good haiku.
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