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Morningstar Visions (Part 5)

Crystallized desert Yellow umbrellas shall rise And weasel shaped dimes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 6:15:00 AM
Nothing can really match the visual floodgate this poem has opened.
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Date: 5/31/2009 2:13:00 PM
beautiful
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Date: 5/29/2009 4:40:00 PM
Interesting images carry your thoughts in this poem. Strong opening line captured my attention right away. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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