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Morning's Thunderstorms

"As early morning thunderstorms"
Bring down a pouring rain
All of nature is silent~still
Snuggled in nest remain

As early morning's lightnings flash
And thunder above rolls
The covers feel comfortable
Deep within my soul

As early morning's cold rain pours
Like Morton Salt today
Your embrace consoles me my love
The Dove is here to stay

Like the dew glistening this morn
Your love sparkles and shines
"As early morning thunderstorms"
Melts this soft heart of mine 

Poet Becca Lucas' "Morning Storms" a Triolet
Line used "As early morning thunderstorms"
Contest: Pick a line/ any line
Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux
Written this 24th day of August 2013
Poet: Sara Kendrick
Form: Poulter's Measure

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2013

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Skat A Date: 9/18/2013 2:03:00 PM Sara, this is lovely ............ luv ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 9/14/2013 7:23:00 AM beautifully written poem Sara...a big congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/13/2013 8:27:00 PM Hi Sara, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/13/2013 12:36:00 PM How lovely this is.........both you and Becca have a way with beautiful words! Congratulations, Sara ! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/13/2013 10:36:00 AM Congratulations on your winning place Sara xx Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/13/2013 8:52:00 AM Congrats on the win in the contest,, sara Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/13/2013 8:35:00 AM So well done, thanks for entering my contest. Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/13/2013 7:31:00 AM Sara you captured this so perfectly Kudos congrats on win Shadow x smile Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/25/2013 11:31:00 AM Sara; This is a beautiful poem. I love it. Right now I would welcome any kind of storms, wheather it be in the morning, or in the middle of the night. It is very dry here in Texas. In Chicago they have a big company where they make the Morton Salt, as you drive by yon the roof it has big words - When it rains it pours. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 8/25/2013 10:25:00 AM Beautiful poem, loved the line "Like Morton Salt today" much. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/24/2013 6:22:00 PM I love the idea of snuggling down...embracing the storm !! Nicely done !! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/24/2013 5:59:00 PM Excellent Sara! I was spellbound. A wonderful winner for sure. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/24/2013 5:14:00 PM when ot rains, it pours, sara... love this charming, flowing artpiece:) hugggs Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/24/2013 4:11:00 PM I too love the storms, they are a great scene to watch, especially in the morning, where peace and cool air will soon follow! You have excited my senses with this illustrious write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 8/24/2013 12:34:00 PM Hi Sara, Nice write about storms.. I read this as it is raining here in Biloxi, Mississippi... Regards, Ken.. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/24/2013 11:24:00 AM Well done, Sara! So glad I stopped by and read this delightful piece. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/24/2013 9:02:00 AM Your embrace consoles me my love The Dove is here to stay What a flow of emotions: and Good luck Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/24/2013 8:48:00 AM you are so flexible with your poetry, yet always so enjoyable to read.... Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/24/2013 8:20:00 AM Good job..! You do have a soft heart I think...BG Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2013 8:13:00 AM - After the storm .... the sun will come to you Sara. - A beautiful poem (I'm a bit unwell with thunderstorms) - Good luck in the contest! - Have a happy weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply