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Morning's Thunderstorms

"As early morning thunderstorms" Bring down a pouring rain All of nature is silent~still Snuggled in nest remain As early morning's lightnings flash And thunder above rolls The covers feel comfortable Deep within my soul As early morning's cold rain pours Like Morton Salt today Your embrace consoles me my love The Dove is here to stay Like the dew glistening this morn Your love sparkles and shines "As early morning thunderstorms" Melts this soft heart of mine Poet Becca Lucas' "Morning Storms" a Triolet Line used "As early morning thunderstorms" Contest: Pick a line/ any line Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux Written this 24th day of August 2013 Poet: Sara Kendrick Form: Poulter's Measure

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Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 2:03:00 PM

Sara, this is lovely ............ luv ~SKAT~

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/14/2013 7:23:00 AM

beautifully written poem Sara...a big congrats on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 8:27:00 PM

Hi Sara, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/13/2013 12:36:00 PM

How lovely this is.........both you and Becca have a way with beautiful words! Congratulations, Sara !

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/13/2013 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Sara xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2013 8:52:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,, sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2013 8:35:00 AM

So well done, thanks for entering my contest.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/13/2013 7:31:00 AM

Sara you captured this so perfectly Kudos congrats on win Shadow x smile

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/25/2013 11:31:00 AM

Sara; This is a beautiful poem. I love it. Right now I would welcome any kind of storms, wheather it be in the morning, or in the middle of the night. It is very dry here in Texas. In Chicago they have a big company where they make the Morton Salt, as you drive by yon the roof it has big words - When it rains it pours. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/25/2013 10:25:00 AM

Beautiful poem, loved the line "Like Morton Salt today" much. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/24/2013 6:22:00 PM

I love the idea of snuggling down...embracing the storm !! Nicely done !!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/24/2013 5:59:00 PM

Excellent Sara! I was spellbound. A wonderful winner for sure.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/24/2013 5:14:00 PM

when ot rains, it pours, sara... love this charming, flowing artpiece:) hugggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/24/2013 4:11:00 PM

I too love the storms, they are a great scene to watch, especially in the morning, where peace and cool air will soon follow! You have excited my senses with this illustrious write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/24/2013 12:34:00 PM

Hi Sara, Nice write about storms.. I read this as it is raining here in Biloxi, Mississippi... Regards, Ken..

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/24/2013 11:24:00 AM

Well done, Sara! So glad I stopped by and read this delightful piece. Love, Kim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/24/2013 9:02:00 AM

Your embrace consoles me my love The Dove is here to stay What a flow of emotions: and Good luck

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/24/2013 8:48:00 AM

you are so flexible with your poetry, yet always so enjoyable to read....

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/24/2013 8:20:00 AM

Good job..! You do have a soft heart I think...BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2013 8:13:00 AM

- After the storm .... the sun will come to you Sara. - A beautiful poem (I'm a bit unwell with thunderstorms) - Good luck in the contest! - Have a happy weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)