Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Morning's Thunderstorms

"As early morning thunderstorms"
Bring down a pouring rain
All of nature is silent~still
Snuggled in nest remain

As early morning's lightnings flash
And thunder above rolls
The covers feel comfortable
Deep within my soul

As early morning's cold rain pours
Like Morton Salt today
Your embrace consoles me my love
The Dove is here to stay

Like the dew glistening this morn
Your love sparkles and shines
"As early morning thunderstorms"
Melts this soft heart of mine 

Poet Becca Lucas' "Morning Storms" a Triolet
Line used "As early morning thunderstorms"
Contest: Pick a line/ any line
Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux
Written this 24th day of August 2013
Poet: Sara Kendrick
Form: Poulter's Measure

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Skat A September 18, 2013 at 2:03 PM Sara, this is lovely ............ luv ~SKAT~

Sandra Adams September 14, 2013 at 7:23 AM beautifully written poem Sara...a big congrats on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 8:27 PM Hi Sara, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Carrie Richards September 13, 2013 at 12:36 PM How lovely this is.........both you and Becca have a way with beautiful words! Congratulations, Sara !

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 13, 2013 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your winning place Sara xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2013 at 8:52 AM Congrats on the win in the contest,, sara

Richard Lamoureux September 13, 2013 at 8:35 AM So well done, thanks for entering my contest.

Shadow Hamilton September 13, 2013 at 7:31 AM Sara you captured this so perfectly Kudos congrats on win Shadow x smile

Lucilla Carrillo August 25, 2013 at 11:31 AM Sara; This is a beautiful poem. I love it. Right now I would welcome any kind of storms, wheather it be in the morning, or in the middle of the night. It is very dry here in Texas. In Chicago they have a big company where they make the Morton Salt, as you drive by yon the roof it has big words - When it rains it pours. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Bl Devnath August 25, 2013 at 10:25 AM Beautiful poem, loved the line "Like Morton Salt today" much. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Carrie Richards August 24, 2013 at 6:22 PM I love the idea of snuggling down...embracing the storm !! Nicely done !!

Connie Marcum Wong August 24, 2013 at 5:59 PM Excellent Sara! I was spellbound. A wonderful winner for sure.

Nette Onclaud August 24, 2013 at 5:14 PM when ot rains, it pours, sara... love this charming, flowing artpiece:) hugggs

Russell Sivey August 24, 2013 at 4:11 PM I too love the storms, they are a great scene to watch, especially in the morning, where peace and cool air will soon follow! You have excited my senses with this illustrious write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Ken Carroll August 24, 2013 at 12:34 PM Hi Sara, Nice write about storms.. I read this as it is raining here in Biloxi, Mississippi... Regards, Ken..

Kim Merryman August 24, 2013 at 11:24 AM Well done, Sara! So glad I stopped by and read this delightful piece. Love, Kim

Dr.Ram Mehta August 24, 2013 at 9:02 AM Your embrace consoles me my love The Dove is here to stay What a flow of emotions: and Good luck

Harry Horsman August 24, 2013 at 8:48 AM you are so flexible with your poetry, yet always so enjoyable to read....

Barbara Gorelick August 24, 2013 at 8:20 AM Good job..! You do have a soft heart I think...BG

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2013 at 8:13 AM - After the storm .... the sun will come to you Sara. - A beautiful poem (I'm a bit unwell with thunderstorms) - Good luck in the contest! - Have a happy weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)