Morning's Kiss

Condensation reigns,
Glistening from rays of sun;
Vibrant moist petals.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 9:09 PM
Beautifully written, great description of dew!
Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Go write on pages of camera an exhibition for the world ... straight from a poet's discerning eye.
Fraser Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 10:58 AM
This is a brillaint one Raul, i just adore the title, and my it all falls into place. Its off to my favs this one, James
Gumbo Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Um, yes, have I mentioned how brilliant your Haiku are yet this morning? I love reading your poems finding treasures everywhere! Applause!
K Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 7:07 PM
Lovely....what a beautiful image
Muller Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 10:34 AM
I love this. Haiku is something I admire from afar. I guess I am too "telly" to make it short. Beautiful. Ginny
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May 23, 2009 at 10:01 AM
Beautiful Raul! You are making me work hard to keep up with you :-) (Just playing around with you.) I love reading your Haiku's. Nate
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