Morning's Fresh Breath

Early bright lithe and lively morning fresh breath,
    Swish through and with a courtly, pirouette.
      Breezing trees hear the whispers of their own leaves.
        The rain's philter makes the earth surface dance.

  Near the river's edge ducklings splash in play;
    Swirls break the echo moving surface song.
      The day rolls up exhausted, nightfall slowly creeps
        And nuzzles into the horizon once again.


3/27/2022
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Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 12:47 AM
Beautiful picture painted. Congratulations!
Leffanta Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:06 PM
And all without the Roper throwing a single loop . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Your imagery is fantastically and carefully done Eve. Wow!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:00 AM
You begin your morning with a lively description. Great imagery. Hugs.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Very pretty. I love the imagery, you've penned a lovely picture of a beautiful day. :)Paulette
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:27 PM
thank you so much, Paulette, always enjoy the inspiration. Blessing's friend
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