Morning Vision

A little prism 
casts hues over the carpet 
the glass cup is full
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 23, 2013 at 6:44 AM
JEREMY, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LINDA
Moreno Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 10:52 PM
nice work, I enjoyede the 5-7-5.
Dom Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 11:39 PM
Nicely done. Very zen.
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Very well done haiku Jeremy. - oxox Anne-Lise
Mckenzie Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Very nicely done you created a feeling most won't notice! I liked it! Laura :)
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 1:27 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Jeremy. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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May 21, 2012 at 3:22 AM
Jeremy, well done haiku !!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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May 21, 2012 at 2:45 AM
morning man lovely haiku
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