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Morning Vision

A little prism casts hues over the carpet the glass cup is full

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2013 6:44:00 AM

JEREMY, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LINDA

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/5/2013 10:52:00 PM

nice work, I enjoyede the 5-7-5.

Michael Dom

Date: 2/18/2013 11:39:00 PM

Nicely done. Very zen.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2012 1:16:00 PM

Very well done haiku Jeremy. - oxox Anne-Lise

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/22/2012 12:21:00 PM

Very nicely done you created a feeling most won't notice! I liked it! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 1:27:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Jeremy. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2012 3:22:00 AM

Jeremy, well done haiku !!! - oxox Anne-Lise

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/21/2012 2:45:00 AM

morning man lovely haiku