Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Morning Time

Little kisses on your neck...
Small shivers not to correct...
Gliding fingers down your back..
Oh sweet love we never lack..
Bodies drenched in their own rain...
A morning breeze still can't tame...
Eyes that mirror all the same heart...
A Saturday morning wonderful start...

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Katie Telling August 12, 2011 at 4:30 AM Wow I love this!! Great imagery... "Bodies drenched in their own rain"--brilliant!! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

Bob Quigley June 13, 2011 at 9:21 AM Good read. Like your message. Hope to see more.

Emma Mantle June 12, 2011 at 7:39 AM Love the passion conveyed in this piece. Great expression 'Bodies drenched in their own rain'. Thanks for stopping by my work. Best wishes as always to you Michael. Em :)

Sara Kendrick June 12, 2011 at 6:05 AM Passionate work..A good beginning for a excellent week end..Your presence at my work is encouraging...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 11, 2011 at 6:59 PM hmmm.. bodies drenched in their own rain.. yeah luv.. this is super romantic ..making it a new fav so Ron can read later on..haha.. maybe evening wonderful start..haha.. we have had a trying day as my latest post will reveal .. Jersey Girl in sad mode for now..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 11, 2011 at 1:25 PM Nice passion in the morning on a saturday, hahah

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 11, 2011 at 12:50 PM well what a great start indeed! keep that romantic heart always, Michael! ^_^ hugs

Nette Onclaud June 11, 2011 at 11:32 AM so exhillarating, michael!! i love mornings like these... cheers to your favorite team! :) huggs, nette

Delysia Hendricks June 11, 2011 at 10:53 AM Whew!!! You have me blushing here. Nice one, Michael. I like. :-)

Judy Riley June 11, 2011 at 10:45 AM Wonderfulful way to exrpess the start of the morning, good use of metophor and rhyme. a joy to read, makes you feel uplifted. Good work, i like it!

Michael J. Falotico June 11, 2011 at 10:44 AM Just to show Soup Family there is more in my life then past heartache.... From tears writes to cold shower writes lol Enjoy... And saw the Yankees win last night at sadium!!!.... ps Thank you Rosanna.oxox

Wilma Neels June 11, 2011 at 10:44 AM Good Morning to you Mr. F ;) this one put a smile on my face.. Lovely romantic piece filled with promise xoxo Wilma