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Morning Time

Little kisses on your neck... Small shivers not to correct... Gliding fingers down your back.. Oh sweet love we never lack.. Bodies drenched in their own rain... A morning breeze still can't tame... Eyes that mirror all the same heart... A Saturday morning wonderful start...

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Katie Telling

Date: 8/12/2011 4:30:00 AM

Wow I love this!! Great imagery... "Bodies drenched in their own rain"--brilliant!! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

Bob Quigley

Date: 6/13/2011 9:21:00 AM

Good read. Like your message. Hope to see more.

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/12/2011 7:39:00 AM

Love the passion conveyed in this piece. Great expression 'Bodies drenched in their own rain'. Thanks for stopping by my work. Best wishes as always to you Michael. Em :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2011 6:05:00 AM

Passionate work..A good beginning for a excellent week end..Your presence at my work is encouraging...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/11/2011 6:59:00 PM

hmmm.. bodies drenched in their own rain.. yeah luv.. this is super romantic ..making it a new fav so Ron can read later on..haha.. maybe evening wonderful start..haha.. we have had a trying day as my latest post will reveal .. Jersey Girl in sad mode for now..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2011 1:25:00 PM

Nice passion in the morning on a saturday, hahah

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/11/2011 12:50:00 PM

well what a great start indeed! keep that romantic heart always, Michael! ^_^ hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/11/2011 11:32:00 AM

so exhillarating, michael!! i love mornings like these... cheers to your favorite team! :) huggs, nette

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/11/2011 10:53:00 AM

Whew!!! You have me blushing here. Nice one, Michael. I like. :-)

Judy Riley

Date: 6/11/2011 10:45:00 AM

Wonderfulful way to exrpess the start of the morning, good use of metophor and rhyme. a joy to read, makes you feel uplifted. Good work, i like it!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/11/2011 10:44:00 AM

Good Morning to you Mr. F ;) this one put a smile on my face.. Lovely romantic piece filled with promise xoxo Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/11/2011 10:44:00 AM

Just to show Soup Family there is more in my life then past heartache.... From tears writes to cold shower writes lol Enjoy... And saw the Yankees win last night at sadium!!!.... ps Thank you Rosanna.oxox