Morning Sunshine

Morning Sunshine Clouds all a’ scatter, the greyest of views Drizzle does tickle the ground Willows are weeping amidst early gloom Solemn this place to be found Chipmunks now scurry to hide in their den Songbirds stay silent away Butterfly tear drops now longing to end Till you awaken this day Then the horizon a whispering sight Ribbons of cellophane gold Trinkets of beams form an early delight Frowns soon to be put on hold Outside my window now beckoning me And in my heart so divine Shimmering happiness, beauty I see You are my morning sunshine Good morning Soupers

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Date: 12/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Good morning Chris I love the way you transitioned from a dreary predawn,to a beautiful and cheerful sunrise. Thank you for a great start to my day. TO MY FAVS it goes.
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Date: 12/20/2016 1:40:00 AM
Beautiful one...Pleasant to read this morning sunshine ... Thanks for sharing... A big 7...
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Date: 12/19/2016 12:36:00 PM
I love this poem Chris. It also brings back special memories for me. An angel of a lady who called me her sunshine when I was little and would sing the song, etc. Very giving and taught me a lot. Thank you for this special poem today :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you for this beautiful comment my sweet friend. I am thrilled this one touched you so.
Date: 12/19/2016 11:11:00 AM
Poetic rays of light...good morning to you too Chris...god bless...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words
Date: 12/19/2016 10:54:00 AM
I'd love to waken to a poem written like this one, Chris, with someone calling me their morning sunshine...sigh. Imagine butterfly teardrops...no, I won't imagine something so beautiful crying. You leave me hoping they know nothing of their life span. You write such endearing lines.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lin. I am happy you enjoyed this one and I am with you, I too hope they don't realize how short their life span is because they forever live in me.
Date: 12/19/2016 9:40:00 AM
Wonderful Chris....The beautiful sun is shining through my window but was tough sledding this morning with -15 temps
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 10:12:00 AM
That's pretty damn cold Tim. Stay warm my friend.
Date: 12/19/2016 9:21:00 AM
Morning Chris! Hope you had a wonderful weekend :) Love it how you find sunshine inside!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Good morning. :)
Date: 12/19/2016 8:30:00 AM
Good morning my friend. How can my "morning" not be good? Once again you have painted a lovely picture with words. It looks amazing:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:50:00 AM
Good morning Alexis. I am happy this one helped you to awaken with a smile. :)
Date: 12/19/2016 8:20:00 AM
Lovely, Chris! There is nothing like rain to bring out the happiness of sun!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:49:00 AM
You are so right Kim. Thank you so much.
Date: 12/19/2016 7:47:00 AM
A lovely poem ... lovelier rhyme ... highly pleasing read ...
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so very much Probir, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/19/2016 7:20:00 AM
Sunshine man...Good morning...Lovely poem : )
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:46:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine. That made me smile. :)
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