Morning Sun

I see the sun rising behind me in the reflection of her eye
it is beautiful
and I can't help but wonder where it gets her shine
there's a smile in there somewhere
I know one day to find
I run my fingers across her length
and I wish this place to stay
dawn it is an awakening
aroused as breath is day
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Tor Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Lovely Poetry written here. Well thought and conveyed. I enjoyed reading this and is a favorite for me. Thank you for posting...
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September 25, 2022 at 11:01 PM
Simply beautiful
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September 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thanks Art
Woodrow Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 10:03 PM
lovely! :)
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September 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thanks Susan
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 8:36 PM
This is utterly gorgeous. A fave!
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September 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Andrea
Nicole Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 7:29 PM
"aroused as breath is day." . . . . I can see why you long to stay. This is beautiful in every way, and your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy
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September 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Brandy
Logan Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Your lines are thought provoking and awakens my senses. Nicely written, T.
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September 25, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Thank you Jenna
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