Morning Sun

I see the sun rising behind me in the reflection of her eye
it is beautiful
and I can't help but wonder where it gets her shine
there's a smile in there somewhere
I know one day to find
I run my fingers across her length
and I wish this place to stay
dawn it is an awakening
aroused as breath is day

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2022 4:21:00 PM

Lovely Poetry written here. Well thought and conveyed. I enjoyed reading this and is a favorite for me. Thank you for posting...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/25/2022 11:01:00 PM

Simply beautiful

Ts Poetry
Date: 9/26/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thanks Art

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/25/2022 10:03:00 PM

lovely! :)

Ts Poetry
Date: 9/26/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thanks Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2022 8:36:00 PM

This is utterly gorgeous. A fave!

Ts Poetry
Date: 9/26/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/25/2022 7:29:00 PM

"aroused as breath is day." . . . . I can see why you long to stay. This is beautiful in every way, and your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy

Ts Poetry
Date: 9/26/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Brandy

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/25/2022 9:10:00 AM

Your lines are thought provoking and awakens my senses. Nicely written, T.

Ts Poetry
Date: 9/25/2022 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Jenna