Morning Stir

the beat of wings the bells and merry flight of snow the flap of angel crew as day unveils

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/20/2024 4:37:00 AM

Kim, a pleasure to read. We may have snow here in the next few days, and when I see it, I shall be thinking of this poem. It's heavenly for all of us who love nature!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2024 6:37:00 AM

Thankyou, Duke. Perhaps this year we will see some in the South. Last year was a bust, not even one snow drop.

Maria Williams

Date: 12/17/2024 8:36:00 PM

Light, delicate and beautiful is what I can say Kim. I would also like to Wish you and your family a Merry and Joyful Christmas filled with peace, laughter and most of all the gift of health. Hugs Maria

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2024 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Maria! May you and your family also be likewise blessed during this season that celebrates God’s love. Hugs :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/16/2024 7:49:00 PM

smooth as butter on holiday tongue, Kim...I adore this one with its image of angelic flight!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2024 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Nette! Merry Christmas!

JCB Brul

Date: 12/16/2024 6:36:00 PM

Oh, what a delicate poem! . How you weave morning as a stirring moment, where "the beat of wings" and "merry flight of snow" is just magical! Both serene and lively like the "flap of angel crew" is an ethereal way of unfolding a new day. This is absolutely a FAVE!! ^___^ JCB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2024 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Jcb xx