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Morning Stillness

MORNING STILLNESS reflective black pool when off the writer’s image like ink illuminating morning recessed stars her cell phone asleep Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/29/2017 10:41:00 AM
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So beautifully expressed Kim... Loved it...
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/29/2017 9:16:00 AM
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Kim, this is a profound and ingenious little poem. My brain was 'off' when I first read it, but not 'asleep'. Yes, the cell has become embedded into people's DNA, and they don't realize that its invasion greatly limits their 'reflection'. An enthusiastic 7:) Amitiés
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2017 10:25:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Anne-Marie!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/29/2017 7:10:00 AM
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Good morning Kim. No wonder you didn't answer when I called. :) Just kidding. The stillness of the morning is a time of day that I enjoy immensely. Your poem expresses these serene moments wonderfully
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2017 7:54:00 AM
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You gave me a good chuckle...lol! Thank you and Good Morning, Chris!

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