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Morning Star

Morning Star with your first breath, wakeful sunlit of dawn, a mystique flaming fire arouse; ablaze is casting shadows in the new outlying mercurial fame horizon, immersed in waves of balmy sunshine. 5/22/2020 Poetry Contest: Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - 4. Morning Star Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4, 5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables. Venus is a very bright star; it is the only celestial body, besides the Moon, that is bright enough to cast a shadow on Earth. It had two different names in the ancient pagan world, as it was seen in the sky twice a day: when the sun came up in the morning, it was called Morning Star and when the sun set in the evening, it was called Evening Star

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Date: 6/23/2020 10:11:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Venus is a great subject, morning or night. I enjoy several of your excellent poems that invoke heavenly bodies. Did you know that under dark skies the Milky Way can cast a shadow as well? Best to you, Eve.
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Date: 6/8/2020 12:30:00 PM
Lovely as the sunrise - delicate as a sunset. Congratulations on your first place Eve.
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:17:00 AM
This is so picturesque Eve! Now my mind has a beautiful painting of horizon immersed in waves of a balmy sunshine. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/8/2020 4:53:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! "Venus" has become so vivid to me through your poetic elucidation. God bless you.
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Date: 6/7/2020 11:45:00 PM
Wow Eve I love this! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:27:00 PM
Nice work, Eve. Love the zig zag format of your yalto. I applaud your effort and talent; congratulations on the top placement.
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Date: 6/7/2020 2:47:00 PM
what a beauty, Eve. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/7/2020 1:47:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great first place in the contest, Eve - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 6:15:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic Yalto, Eve:-) Beautiful format, too! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 5/23/2020 8:25:00 PM
This is wonderful, Eve. Love your cool patterning of it too.
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Date: 5/23/2020 10:30:00 AM
Eve you have enlightened us with this poem. The imagery is wonderful.
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Date: 5/22/2020 10:07:00 PM
You have used some of my very favorite words in the whole world, Eve, but in this poem they all seem fresh and magical.
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