Morning Songs

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Poetry/Other/morning songs
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-453-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 02, 2023
For the Standard contest, A Monoku, Haiku and 4 line Rhyme
sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 06/12/2023

Second Place

it begins at dawn a tweet tweet then a beep beep~ a crow caws loudly tiny little chirps twitters silly shrills whistles ~ hel looo hel looo trill and then, begins the circled flight in the sky swooping as one, turning, diving- little birds fly then, a pair of gliding birds gracefully dip and soar oh, such divine and sublime sounds from tiny birds pour

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 2:20:00 AM

- Congratulations Constance ,,, on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2023 6:37:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment and hugs !

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/12/2023 3:36:00 PM

Constance, love the bird imagery, a sweet set of poems, congratulations on your winning placement!

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:53:00 PM

Tania, thank you so much for the contest and for my placement and for the compliment and congratulations !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2023 1:23:00 PM

Just beautiful, Constance. Also, I have an important question for you regarding Soup's crazy new rules for contests. See my soup mail.

Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2023 4:03:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, I kept the date as the sponsor is asking for a date. I have replied to your soupmail !

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/2/2023 7:17:00 PM

: ) love this as a reminder to enjoy life's moments

Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:36:00 PM

Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, there is nothing more magical than dawn birds singing a song !

Jay Narain

Date: 6/2/2023 11:27:00 AM

Beautiful vision of crows in morning. Love it.

Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:36:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment !