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Poetry/Other/morning songs
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-453-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 02, 2023
For the Standard contest, A Monoku, Haiku and 4 line Rhyme
sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 06/12/2023

Second Place

 

Morning Songs

 
it begins at dawn a tweet tweet then a beep beep~ a crow caws loudly tiny little chirps twitters silly shrills whistles ~ hel looo hel looo trill and then, begins the circled flight in the sky swooping as one, turning, diving- little birds fly then, a pair of gliding birds gracefully dip and soar oh, such divine and sublime sounds from tiny birds pour
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Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:20 AM
- Congratulations Constance ,,, on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
La France Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment and hugs !
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Constance, love the bird imagery, a sweet set of poems, congratulations on your winning placement!
La France Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Tania, thank you so much for the contest and for my placement and for the compliment and congratulations !
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Just beautiful, Constance. Also, I have an important question for you regarding Soup's crazy new rules for contests. See my soup mail.
La France Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 4:03 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, I kept the date as the sponsor is asking for a date. I have replied to your soupmail !
McBride  Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 7:17 PM
: ) love this as a reminder to enjoy life's moments
La France Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, there is nothing more magical than dawn birds singing a song !
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