Home » Poems » Chris Green » Morning Song

Morning Song

Morning Song Within this waking garden heart shaped rose petals, crimson shades of deepest desire meander melodically upon a symphonic morning breeze in harmonized whispers, gathering beneath dawn’s illumined sunrise serenade singing to the one I love, Happy Valentine’s Day Good morning Soupers

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/16/2017 5:49:00 PM

Happy belated Valentine's to you, Chris... this is beautiful!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/15/2017 8:57:00 AM

Hi Chris, What a beautiful Valentine's day poem to wake up to. And it sounds lovely as well :-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 2/15/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I appreciate your kindness always and I am thrilled you liked this one.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2017 2:54:00 PM

Oh I can hear your song and its beautiful..And I can hear a piano in the background..Good morning../aftrrnoon Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 3:23:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend for your kind words today.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/14/2017 12:54:00 PM

Cool V Day poem, Chris. That is some garden you have ... heart shaped rose petals, wow! Your lady I'm sure love this Morning Song. Very romantic write from the master of romance. Love and peace, bro.

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 1:59:00 PM

Thanks so much Freddie for always reading and commenting on my work.

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2017 11:03:00 AM

Cupid arrow has struck up a melody!..Wonderful write Chris

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/14/2017 10:48:00 AM

Chris, Morning Song will awake sleepers everywhere! Great write! My best, Chuck

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Chuck for your kind words.

David Bose

Date: 2/14/2017 9:35:00 AM

Wonderful vocabulary, pleasant imagery, steady tempo ... you nailed this one, too, Chris. Keep up the terrific work! Dave

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thanks so very much David. I appreciate your visits.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2017 8:10:00 AM

- Thanks for the beautiful song, Chris :) - Happy Valentine's Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 9:13:00 AM

Happy Valentine's Day Anne-Lise. Thank you so much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/14/2017 7:22:00 AM

A beautiful poem to read today, Chris. Happy Valentines Day! Thank you for sharing all your talents. :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi, Happy Valentine's Day to you too.

Ruth Wrights

Date: 2/14/2017 6:44:00 AM

have a great valentines day :) i love your poem... Hugs stef-

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much Stef

Darren White

Date: 2/14/2017 6:12:00 AM

Good morning Chris, wishing you the same. For now I join you for coffee, dance and all finished.... Such melodious early morning poem, alliteration. It sings and dances tenderly.

Chris Green
Date: 2/14/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much Darren.