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Morning Song

perpetual song
always faithful pair of wings
glory’s words concealed

ere the dawn, touches my ears
then my mind ~ settles in soul

11/2/2019

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Judy Ball

November 5, 2019 at 6:49 AM

Ah! Sweet serenity to awake to the sweet song of birds.\ As a young girl I used to awake to the song of Robins in the morning. Also of course the crow of roosters which I always found pleasant. Love it. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues

November 5, 2019 at 7:24 AM

Thank you, Judy!

David Smith

November 4, 2019 at 5:49 AM

Yes. Truth well penned. We awake to a variety of bird calls in our yard. Summer just starting in NZ. Native Tui and Wood Pigeons as well as sparrows blackbirds and Fantails and little Wax Eyes form the main part of the Orchestra with occasional guest appearances. Thanks for your reminder of what we have. Regards David in NZ

Kim Rodrigues

November 4, 2019 at 3:48 PM

Thanks for your wonderful share! :) Kim

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2019 at 7:42 PM

Beautifully inspirational tanka, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2019 at 6:18 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Eric Ashford

November 2, 2019 at 4:13 PM

Yes to this fine muse. You do justice to the theme of 'morning song.'

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2019 at 6:18 AM

Thanks so much, Eric!

Panagiota Romios

November 2, 2019 at 4:02 PM

Truly unique, Kim. You and Lindley have a mastery of English that is truly beautiful, Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2019 at 6:19 AM

So nice of you to say so, Panagiota! Be blessed, dearest one!

Caren Krutsinger

November 2, 2019 at 2:31 PM

My mind should settle "in soul" more often. I fear I think too much.

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2019 at 6:21 AM

When you do think of those things small and big that you are thankful for. Those thank offerings delivered to God will bring you peace. Hugs-a-million...Kim

Sandra Adams

November 2, 2019 at 2:28 PM

i think i needed to reflect upon this one today....sometimes sadness grabs a hold of me...i was comforted by this one...thank you for that...beautiful tanka Kim :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2019 at 6:21 AM

So glad to know that the poem provided encouragement! Love ya with a hug...Kim