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Morning Smiles

Morning smiles that stay all day... From sun to moon we had our way... A kiss that starts with the shades down... To a hug on the beach under stars found... Lasting memories caught on pages flipped... Remembering slow kisses slowly sipped... (my first attempt at poem in weeks)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:59:00 PM

HALF QUARTER.... YEAH.... COWBOYS.... 7 TO 3...... YAHOOOOOOOO.... XOX~PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2012 7:06:00 PM

I meant to say, my early morning smiles and energy annoy me myself and I.. I bet Nathan, is telling me to shut up in the inside....... ha ha... I'm glad he once mentioned to me, with out my passion, he would have never fallen for me...... xox~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2012 7:03:00 PM

Michael, I first read the note on the bottom of your poem. LOL~Oh, my I bet you learned to walk before you learned to crawl... You are amazing, you can pick up a pen without failure. I'm smiling my way down this comment. I know how it is to wake up with smiles, and than sleep with the same smiles I woke up with. Just this morning I asked Nathan, if my early morning smiles and energy bothered him.. He said no...lol..I told him it should... I sound to good to be true, it annoys me. your poem is amazing, and so is your friendship... always~PD

Elena De'Orio

Date: 7/7/2012 5:30:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful

Kash Poet

Date: 7/7/2012 12:27:00 PM

A lovely write by you Michael.Enjoyed very much.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/7/2012 12:12:00 PM

You did a really awesome job for just starting back up Michael! In fact this is a wonderful poem at any time my friend! It's nice to see you back, I hope things are going well with you! Great Work!!

Cindy Cayton

Date: 7/7/2012 9:24:00 AM

well, your attempt was with success, I was just reposting then came up with a truthful 101 poem called I'm in Love with Seven Men, hey I'm honest to a fault~ very nice piece of poetry there, take care, and God bless, Cindy

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/7/2012 8:15:00 AM

And a very good first attempt is, Michael! Very romantic couplet - Tim