Morning Shore Haiku

curling white foams spread~
        a little orange crab crawls
                     bathing in sunshine



23 March 2021
For “All Yours (March 23) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place
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George Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Recently we had a trip to a seaside resort ! Enjoyed being kissed by the foamy waves and saw a number of crabs making holes on the sand ! A delightful haiku, Jez !
Pathak Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 12:52 AM
What a haiku, what a morning to wake up with! Kudos dear poet
Canerdy Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Charming haiku, JCB. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 5:20 PM
lovely imagery ~
Kauffman Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 10:59 AM
JCB, your lovely haiku is as fresh as morning sunshine at the seashore. Made me smile remembering that feeling! Blessings to you!
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 7:31 AM
- A lovely sight in the sunshine ... (just wait until it gets big and strong :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 7:03 AM
JCB, the imagery in your haiku is delightful! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Mcintosh Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Love it... love it... love the thought. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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