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Morning Rain

through glaze of morn’s reflection

drizzles mirror the lake,

in gushed tunes of fine crystals 

...silencing the gulls



Do Do Contest of Francine Roberts
5/7/2017

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2017

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May 11, 2017 at 4:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Nette. Enjoyed it this morning. All the best for the contest ;)

May 9, 2017 at 1:08 PM

The imagery is beautiful, Nette...the end line excellent! #7+ Hugs ~ paul

May 9, 2017 at 11:00 AM

I can feel the soft rain, Nette, beautiful, Dodoitsu:) your words have such soothing effect:) a 7:)

May 7, 2017 at 9:59 AM

What a dramatic end line! Wonderful show of soft rain's effect.

May 7, 2017 at 2:50 AM

The rhythm of melodious rain can awe everyone, even the birds. Gentle, sparkling verse!

May 7, 2017 at 1:49 AM

You have to come here is raining cats and dogs!!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 7, 2017 at 12:36 AM

Amazing what you did with this form, Nette. I especially loved the sound of that last line!!

Frederic Parker

May 6, 2017 at 9:57 PM

a very serene painting poet...good luck

May 6, 2017 at 1:10 PM

If it wasn't for souls like yourself, we wouldn’t have the eyes or ears to see and hear the beauty that surrounds us in life. Well written. Emile. #7

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