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Morning Rain

through glaze of morn’s reflection drizzles mirror the lake, in gushed tunes of fine crystals ...silencing the gulls Do Do Contest of Francine Roberts 5/7/2017

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Date: 5/11/2017 4:00:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Nette. Enjoyed it this morning. All the best for the contest ;)
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Date: 5/9/2017 1:08:00 PM
The imagery is beautiful, Nette...the end line excellent! #7+ Hugs ~ paul
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Date: 5/9/2017 11:00:00 AM
I can feel the soft rain, Nette, beautiful, Dodoitsu:) your words have such soothing effect:) a 7:)
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Date: 5/7/2017 9:59:00 AM
What a dramatic end line! Wonderful show of soft rain's effect.
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Date: 5/7/2017 2:50:00 AM
The rhythm of melodious rain can awe everyone, even the birds. Gentle, sparkling verse!
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Date: 5/7/2017 1:49:00 AM
You have to come here is raining cats and dogs!!! :)
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Date: 5/7/2017 12:36:00 AM
Amazing what you did with this form, Nette. I especially loved the sound of that last line!!
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Date: 5/6/2017 9:57:00 PM
a very serene painting poet...good luck
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Date: 5/6/2017 1:10:00 PM
If it wasn't for souls like yourself, we wouldn’t have the eyes or ears to see and hear the beauty that surrounds us in life. Well written. Emile. #7
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