Morning Pancakes

Screamed yet he cut more Dark syrup drips on the floor No screams anymore
By Robb A. Kopp All Rights Reserved © MMX
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Congrats Robb on your winning poem in the Dark Poet Contest..great words.. great win... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 2:54 PM
oooh, lala, this one ROCKS, so short yet so SWEEET. Congrats on the HM. Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your win Robb in "The Dark Poet" contest sponsored by S K A T. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 3:15 AM
Irma is going to have her hands full selecting from these exceptional Dark Poet poems. The best to you in the contest Robb. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 2:44 PM
this one "killed" me...I dont think Ill ever think of pancakes the same again. BG
Arteaga Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 11:30 AM
o.0 to the point! that's how darkness creeping so quickly without even knowing, good luck!
Orozco Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 11:29 AM
wow love this.
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