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Awake before the sunrise, one with the breeze and water. Like my father who brought me here and taught me this graceful dance of line and wind and stillness~ the art of fly fishing~ And the simple pleasure of a morning on the river. 5/5/2019 Free Verse Or Rhyme Poetry Contest Eve Roper, Sponsor Picture #3

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Date: 5/21/2019 8:26:00 PM
This poem is framed from within with the words "This graceful dance of line and wind and stillness" ---perfection in thought!
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Date: 5/21/2019 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, Craig. That's my favorite part, too :)
Date: 5/14/2019 3:17:00 PM
Sounds lovely, dear friend! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/14/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 5/12/2019 1:45:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, P.S. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2019 3:04:00 PM
And congratulations to you as well :). Thank you. -ps
Date: 5/6/2019 3:14:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Timothy! So glad you liked it. :)
Date: 5/6/2019 2:19:00 PM
So expressive and elegant in its (deceiving) simplicity. One of the pleasures of life---so perfectly penned. A FAVE! :) gw
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon for your encouraging comments and of course for the FAVE--I am honored.
Date: 5/6/2019 9:06:00 AM
You have brought the photo to life, I love "this graceful dance... of line and wind and stillness" xomo
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Date: 5/6/2019 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. :) ~ps

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