Get Your Premium Membership

Morning of a Buddhist Monk

Rise upon the trucks by dawn,trooping the soi`s (streets) soaring heat upon their gowns,shouldered a colateral urn a halt is all that`s needed,kick off your footwear A knelt position, blessing process begins a donation required,spiritual feelings overwhelming his morning just begun,before the group return to monestry For food and prayers...The morning of a Buddhist monk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2011 2:21:00 PM
A fne write my friend. I think it's Free Verse. I could be wrong though. I enjoyed reading it for you. Really good imagery. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2011 3:47:00 PM
Nice work.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 7:32:00 PM
sorry for the late reply Paul.. Fridays are super busy for this "Sweetheart" luv.. yes Free Verse is proper form for this type of write.. in fact..my new contest entry is going to be a free verse form.. if it does not rhyme or have certain syllable count u can be safe listing it as free verse.. my apologies luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for the soup mail, this is a nice work in Free verse, Paul
Login to Reply