Morning of a Buddhist Monk

Rise  upon the trucks by dawn,trooping the soi`s (streets)
              soaring heat upon their gowns,shouldered a colateral urn
                a halt is all that`s needed,kick off your footwear
                    
                    A knelt position, blessing process begins
                      a donation required,spiritual feelings overwhelming
                        his morning just begun,before the group return to monestry
                            
                          For food and prayers...The morning of a Buddhist monk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 27, 2011 at 2:21 PM
A fne write my friend. I think it's Free Verse. I could be wrong though. I enjoyed reading it for you. Really good imagery. God Bless, JB
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June 25, 2011 at 3:47 PM
Nice work.
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June 24, 2011 at 7:32 PM
sorry for the late reply Paul.. Fridays are super busy for this "Sweetheart" luv.. yes Free Verse is proper form for this type of write.. in fact..my new contest entry is going to be a free verse form.. if it does not rhyme or have certain syllable count u can be safe listing it as free verse.. my apologies luv..
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June 24, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Thanks for the soup mail, this is a nice work in Free verse, Paul
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