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morning news on fire planes and towers, pentagon — we N E V E R F O R G E T. jumpers — desperate, hold family in woeful reverie. G O D S E E S firemen sacrificed. smoke cloud chases frantic New York City — A T W A R. mourning two towers? no - the deceased! their kith and kin remain A W A R E sunken ships of steel — square grave fountains, a perpetual flood — D I G S D E E P* 9-11-2019 *to make a lot of effort with one’s resources. In this case, it is a pocket of tears.

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Date: 9/16/2019 7:26:00 AM
An unusual poem, for a most unfathomable day, my friend. Nicely done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2019 7:28:00 AM
Thank you! Still breaks my heart...
Date: 9/15/2019 6:34:00 PM
you poignantly memorialized that day and those who made sacrifices with your poem here, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2019 7:37:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 9/14/2019 11:02:00 PM
Kim this brought back the memories like it was yesterday! I still remember where I was and what I told my kids! Some things never leave the memory so sad they usually are of the worst ones!;) great write !;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2019 7:37:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda! I remember it all too....tears
Date: 9/11/2019 1:35:00 PM
Potent, excellent ink. Hugs! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 5:07:00 PM
A sad day even 18 years later! Thank you, Maureen!
Date: 9/11/2019 10:12:00 AM
What a GREAT dedication to this day Kim, well done my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Bobby!
Date: 9/11/2019 7:55:00 AM
A wonderful commemorative poem for today. God bless America and you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Regina! :)

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