Morning Moon

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Morning moon, dawn-white Kingdom come at end of night In daytime starlight 4/29/18

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Date: 6/10/2018 6:03:00 PM

Hello Michelle, I like the way the words flow together. Have a nice evening my friend.

Date: 5/4/2018 9:21:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. I can see it :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/4/2018 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi - I did see the moon still out at about 5:30 the other morning, which inspired this-

Date: 5/2/2018 11:11:00 PM

Yes! I love this one. A FAVE for me, Michelle, immediately. Bravo! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/4/2018 3:29:00 PM

So grateful for your generous words!

Date: 5/1/2018 9:23:00 AM

Your haiku sways like a dance! Love!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/1/2018 2:01:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment!