Morning Moment

After the brief night
Into the rising sun
Five blackbirds in flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 24, 2009 at 1:43 PM
A beautiful moment it is, mornings are my favorite part of the day...Raul
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May 30, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Once could almost see this haiku, like a beautiful photo taken in that instant--you've captured that moment indeed! :)
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May 29, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Nice use of imagery and rhyme for a creative poem. Enjoyed it. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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May 28, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Great haiku, Jim. Love the image of the birds flying toward the sun.
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