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Written - 15th September 2023

Morning Mist

Twirling swirls of morning mist
Embrace landscape ‘til the earth is kissed
By sun beaming down anew
Quenching its thirst on refreshing dew.

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Joanna Daniel

September 19, 2023 at 1:47 AM

I love your addition:) so picturesque:)

Beryl Edmonds

October 11, 2023 at 6:55 PM

Thank you Joanna -:) Belle

Victor Buhagiar

September 16, 2023 at 1:44 AM

This is lovely and so full of imagery. A hint of sadness, perhaps? Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds

September 16, 2023 at 2:49 AM

Perhaps thereis a hidden sadness, who knows. Thank you Victor. Hugs, Belle

Arthur Vaso

September 15, 2023 at 10:42 PM

Very beautiful, enjoyed reading this lovely poem.

Beryl Edmonds

September 16, 2023 at 2:46 AM

Thank you very much Arthur, pleased you enjoyed read… Belle

Jan Allison

September 15, 2023 at 3:29 PM

your opening for the collaboration poem was perfect Belle, I've not looked at the contest i find romantic lines hard to write. hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

September 15, 2023 at 4:04 PM

Thank you Jan, us poets all have our preferences in the poetic lines we write, though I’m sure you could write of romance in response to the sponsor of this collaboration too… Hugs, Belle xx

Sam Kauffman

September 15, 2023 at 11:18 AM

Lovely collaboration, Belle! I like the way you set up Charlie's poem. Very clever and original. Best wishes and blessings to you.

Beryl Edmonds

September 15, 2023 at 2:10 PM

So nice to read that from you Sam, thank you very much ~ Belle

Silent One

September 15, 2023 at 3:30 AM

Sounds lovely and romantic.. you really take the reader to your special memory...

Beryl Edmonds

September 15, 2023 at 7:40 AM

Thank you Silent One, for the contest we’re allowed to put our verse above or below the sponsor’s, mine is above, romantic, I’m not sure about that… Belle

Written - 15th September 2023

Morning Mist

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