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Morning Mist

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Written - 15th September 2023

Twirling swirls of morning mist Embrace landscape ‘til the earth is kissed By sun beaming down anew Quenching its thirst on refreshing dew.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/19/2023 1:47:00 AM

I love your addition:) so picturesque:)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/11/2023 6:55:00 PM

Thank you Joanna -:) Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2023 1:44:00 AM

This is lovely and so full of imagery. A hint of sadness, perhaps? Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/16/2023 2:49:00 AM

Perhaps thereis a hidden sadness, who knows. Thank you Victor. Hugs, Belle

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/15/2023 10:42:00 PM

Very beautiful, enjoyed reading this lovely poem.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/16/2023 2:46:00 AM

Thank you very much Arthur, pleased you enjoyed read… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2023 3:29:00 PM

your opening for the collaboration poem was perfect Belle, I've not looked at the contest i find romantic lines hard to write. hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/15/2023 4:04:00 PM

Thank you Jan, us poets all have our preferences in the poetic lines we write, though I’m sure you could write of romance in response to the sponsor of this collaboration too… Hugs, Belle xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/15/2023 11:18:00 AM

Lovely collaboration, Belle! I like the way you set up Charlie's poem. Very clever and original. Best wishes and blessings to you.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/15/2023 2:10:00 PM

So nice to read that from you Sam, thank you very much ~ Belle

Tom Woody

Date: 9/15/2023 6:14:00 AM

Sweetly romantic, a lover's stroll through a cool misty morning. Did they kiss? If I was a betting man I'd say yes

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/15/2023 2:06:00 PM

That’s so nice of you Tom, thank you, Belle

Tom Woody
Date: 9/15/2023 7:45:00 AM

No, it was your last line :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/15/2023 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Tom, the second verse the sponsor of the contest wrote and that’s the most romantic, I suspect that’s the verse you were referring too…Belle

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 3:30:00 AM

Sounds lovely and romantic.. you really take the reader to your special memory...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/15/2023 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Silent One, for the contest we’re allowed to put our verse above or below the sponsor’s, mine is above, romantic, I’m not sure about that… Belle