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Morning Mist

The rolling of clouds, Covers the islands below; Morning mist ascends.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2009 8:28:00 AM

Raul, the "rolling of clouds" me of the Smokey Mountains, even though there are no "islands" there. I have seen the fog rising above N. Florida's St. George Island, and this great haiku invokes that image as well. Thanks for your thoughts on "Poetry." Bless you, Carolyn

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/18/2009 11:24:00 PM

Those clouds are just rolling away, you painted a peaceful morning. Great one RM. -Boo

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/18/2009 1:43:00 AM

Your description paint great pictures. Tyler

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/10/2009 9:42:00 PM

Great choice of words, a great haiku.

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/10/2009 4:22:00 AM

So lovely! I saw this clearly... what a beautiful picture this creates in my mind. :) Thanks so much for your kind comments on Wind Whisper, have a great day! :) Amy

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/9/2009 3:12:00 PM

Nice haiku, I can picture this in my mind. DN

Arany P.

Date: 2/9/2009 1:31:00 AM

great image Raul... i love this form.. it is always able to print the picture so well! ~ Arany