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Morning Mist

The rolling of clouds,
Covers the islands below;
Morning mist ascends.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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Carolyn Devonshire

March 3, 2009 at 8:28 AM

Raul, the "rolling of clouds" me of the Smokey Mountains, even though there are no "islands" there. I have seen the fog rising above N. Florida's St. George Island, and this great haiku invokes that image as well. Thanks for your thoughts on "Poetry." Bless you, Carolyn

February 18, 2009 at 11:24 PM

Those clouds are just rolling away, you painted a peaceful morning. Great one RM. -Boo

February 18, 2009 at 1:43 AM

Your description paint great pictures. Tyler

February 10, 2009 at 9:42 PM

Great choice of words, a great haiku.

February 10, 2009 at 4:22 AM

So lovely! I saw this clearly... what a beautiful picture this creates in my mind. :) Thanks so much for your kind comments on Wind Whisper, have a great day! :) Amy

February 9, 2009 at 3:12 PM

Nice haiku, I can picture this in my mind. DN

February 9, 2009 at 1:31 AM

great image Raul... i love this form.. it is always able to print the picture so well! ~ Arany

February 8, 2009 at 12:54 AM

Beautiful picture Raul.Rgds Bian

February 7, 2009 at 3:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful place to be. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed it. Karen

February 7, 2009 at 6:44 AM

Perfect Haiku, Raul. The images this creates are vivid and it does paint a wonderful picture! Love and best wishes always, Robin

Kristin Reynolds

February 7, 2009 at 3:41 AM

A very visual poem, love, Kristin

February 6, 2009 at 4:34 PM

An amazingly vivid and beautiful visual. Nicely done. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

February 6, 2009 at 1:25 PM

Nice imagery in this piece.

Deirdre Omaidin

February 6, 2009 at 12:44 PM

I like it, I like it, I really like it especially the rolling of clouds, don't need any camera here. Wonderful Regards: Déirdre

February 6, 2009 at 12:35 PM

Super Haiku , Raul , in perfect format ...

February 6, 2009 at 12:30 PM

Nice imagery and flow in your Haiku! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

February 6, 2009 at 12:23 PM

I love the visual image of this beautiful haiku! ~ Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

February 6, 2009 at 12:13 PM

Raul, the form is perfect in its count and quality is wonderful. Your words really make the picture for us. Michael

February 6, 2009 at 12:07 PM

Raul this Haiku is very well written and paints a very vivid picture - God Bless, MJ

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