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Morning Messages

their sweet messages strum of bow as dawn ascends drum presses to hone wing’d reflection in the pane decoding birdsong array 3/3/2021

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Date: 3/5/2021 11:50:00 AM
Hi Kim, Springs music begins with the return of the birds...lovely poem for us to reflect on..... Take Care, Paulette
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2021 1:09:00 PM
Lovely the way you worded that! Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 3/5/2021 6:45:00 AM
- A lovely morning, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2021 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/4/2021 8:35:00 AM
Lovely. Can't wait to hear bird songs outside my kitchen window or waking me in the morning. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2021 9:29:00 AM
When I get up before dawn, I hear them sing!
Date: 3/3/2021 1:31:00 PM
There is nothing as marvelous as morning messages my friend! You are spot on.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:20:00 PM
I love them! They wake up my mind!
Date: 3/3/2021 9:21:00 AM
Seems comments are off until now. A great tanka.. I must try one some day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:21:00 PM
I thought something was going on! Thank you!

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