Morning Light

Dense fog lingers and crawls
Forrest trails lead to the falls

Cool shaded streams flow silently
Stars strewn above shine brilliantly

Morning sky flirting with night
Clouds run together dark meets light

Orange Rust Clouds trying to shine
Darkness and time staying behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 4:49 PM
POW!!! you hit the mark with this one. John Henry Loving III
Cervantes Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 11:27 AM
Absolutely beautiful....
Winter Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 8:25 AM
Wow. I must agree I am overwhelmed with your imagery here. Gorgeous. Love, Shar
Steadman Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 8:49 PM
i just wana say this is a fantastic write and i also fixed the mess up on that one poem of mine thanks noticing for me
Higgins Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Incredible imagery flowing through this write...loved this read.
Mckenzie Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Excellent use of imagery! lovely write! Laura :)
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