Morning Jewels

String of liquid pearls,
Strewn across the garden’s neck:
Necklace made of dew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 4:26 AM
Beautiful image. I envision willow strands laced with morning dew... only poets will think of water droplets being like pearls or diamonds though... you seem to have a knack for the haiku field.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 12:15 AM
Congrats Raul on your outstanding win with this equally outstanding piece luv..
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 11:23 PM
Very pretty. Congratulations. Joyce
Ramage Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Well Raul, what a creative mind. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 3:33 AM
a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Congratulations on your amazing win!!!!!======Lori
Poet Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Wonderful haiku!Congrats Raul on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 11:24 AM
CONGRATS RAUL ON YOUR BIG WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..
Brown Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Raul. Love,Carol
Williams Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 4:02 AM
hey Raul congrats on your win, nice haiku..David
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 6:14 PM
This is purely delightful. I take it , it's for the DO/Dew/Due contest. It should shine.
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