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Morning Jewels

String of liquid pearls, Strewn across the garden’s neck: Necklace made of dew.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2013 4:26:00 AM

Beautiful image. I envision willow strands laced with morning dew... only poets will think of water droplets being like pearls or diamonds though... you seem to have a knack for the haiku field.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2011 12:15:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your outstanding win with this equally outstanding piece luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/15/2011 11:23:00 PM

Very pretty. Congratulations. Joyce

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/15/2011 10:45:00 PM

Well Raul, what a creative mind. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2011 3:33:00 AM

a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/13/2011 8:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your amazing win!!!!!======Lori

Kash Poet

Date: 9/13/2011 3:01:00 PM

Wonderful haiku!Congrats Raul on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 11:24:00 AM

CONGRATS RAUL ON YOUR BIG WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2011 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Raul. Love,Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/13/2011 4:02:00 AM

hey Raul congrats on your win, nice haiku..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2011 6:14:00 PM

This is purely delightful. I take it , it's for the DO/Dew/Due contest. It should shine.