Asiphe Tomeli Poet Bio

Morning In the Cape

Early morning
The mist is still asleep on the lonely well polished grass
The birds are crying
I'm stuck with this load on my back
Morning in the Cape
Busy life, people having fun
The pavement is my bed
The insects are my friends
Welcome to my world

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Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 10:21 AM A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2013 at 9:28 AM Cool poem and big congrats to you on the winners list.

Skat A July 3, 2013 at 11:54 PM very nice........... skat

Karen Anglesey July 3, 2013 at 7:27 PM Very well composed and great contrast. Stunning imagery. Congrats on your win :)

Connie Gildersleeve July 3, 2013 at 6:38 PM Congrtulations on your fantastic win. Very deep and kind of sad. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Seosamh De Burca May 13, 2013 at 12:10 PM You capture light and dark in your poem very well. I enjoyed reading your poem and felt the sadness also. Well done