Morning Eyes

window frames genuflection
eyes closed
reflection of colortones
bold and bright, bent
by early morning light, praise
of knobby oaks
like a rising thicket of fog
noticed only by specularity
of a poet’s repose

9/4/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 1:49 AM
the poet notices everything. That is you Kim. Great job.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, sweet lady! :)
Green Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Your poetry always creates such thought in my mind. This was no different Kim. Really nice.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Sands Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Very nice Kim! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:34 AM
I am picturing a devout nun, praying in the sanctuary of a beautiful stain glass church, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 2:34 PM
A lovely image! Thanks, Caren!
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