Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Morning Doves

The creek rise rolled in mixed with fog
Dampness coats shrubs and trees
Morning Doves sing through it all
Yet no sound from the bees

The Creek's Rise(original)
Written:02-13-2019(Original writing)
Contest:Rithimus Divisa 6'
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Howard Kerr March 4, 2021 at 3:34 PM Hi Sara I’d like to thank you for your soup mail on recent Monoku contest selection. Morning doves is a very lyrical creation which transports the reader. Imaginative tale in four lines. Howard Sara Kendrick March 5, 2021 at 4:09 AM Howard, Thanks for the kind review of my work. This is one that I wrote out on the porch. A couple of years back. It is only part of the original. Sara

Kathy Anderson October 16, 2020 at 7:27 AM Nice picture your words paint. I love doves! Sara Kendrick October 16, 2020 at 9:26 AM Kathy, Thanks for the visit to my pages. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jack Horne September 28, 2020 at 8:12 AM great job - this paints such a vivid picture, even showing the sounds Sara Kendrick September 28, 2020 at 12:39 PM Jack, out on the porch the sound of the birds, coyotes, and other nature sounds are very real early in the morn with the sounds made by man like the sound of tires on a wet pavement. Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2020 at 9:59 AM This is very nice. The description of that quiet time with only the sound of the doves! Sara Kendrick September 27, 2020 at 2:36 PM Andrea, You have a way with words to lift a person's spirits. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley September 25, 2020 at 2:38 PM So peaceful. What a serene blanket of words, very beautiful and comforting. Sara Kendrick September 27, 2020 at 2:36 PM Betty, Early morn is a wonderful time to enjoy. I hope that you get your time alone to enjoy nature. Your presence at my work is uplifting. Sara

Joseph P. DiMino September 25, 2020 at 10:55 AM Love the descriptive -- I think that, what we see in nature gives us a deeper, clearer window into ourselves. Great work, Sara! Sara Kendrick September 25, 2020 at 2:17 PM Joe, Nature does help me to dig deeper into my core. Your comment was very helpful. Sara

Paula Goldsmith September 23, 2020 at 9:04 AM A beautiful write/poem with a beautiful picture. Enjoy your day.......... Sara Kendrick September 23, 2020 at 10:12 AM Paula, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2020 at 7:36 AM - A beautiful and special moment, Sara - Luck in the contest :) - Thank you very much for your comments on my poem "You Are The Giver" a pleasure to read your words about love :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick September 23, 2020 at 8:34 AM SS, Thanks for the visit to my page. I love the minutes out on the porch in early morn where I can write my thoughts down. It is not happening very much anymore. Sara

M. L. Kiser September 22, 2020 at 1:30 PM They do indeed and beautifully; I enjoyed this piece. Sara Kendrick September 23, 2020 at 2:53 AM M.L., Thanks for the awesome comment. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Susan Ashley September 22, 2020 at 7:40 AM The atmospheric imagery is superb and intriguing, Sara. My imagination is captivated by your clever last line.. Beautiful! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Sara Kendrick September 22, 2020 at 8:16 AM Susan, Your comments are uplifting. It was too early in the spring for those bees to be humming around every blossom. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara