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The creek rise rolled in mixed with fog Dampness coats shrubs and trees Morning Doves sing through it all Yet no sound from the bees The Creek's Rise(original) Written:02-13-2019(Original writing) Contest:Rithimus Divisa 6' Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/4/2021 3:34:00 PM

Hi Sara I’d like to thank you for your soup mail on recent Monoku contest selection. Morning doves is a very lyrical creation which transports the reader. Imaginative tale in four lines. Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2021 4:09:00 AM

Howard, Thanks for the kind review of my work. This is one that I wrote out on the porch. A couple of years back. It is only part of the original. Sara

Kathy Anderson

Date: 10/16/2020 7:27:00 AM

Nice picture your words paint. I love doves!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2020 9:26:00 AM

Kathy, Thanks for the visit to my pages. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/28/2020 8:12:00 AM

great job - this paints such a vivid picture, even showing the sounds

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/28/2020 12:39:00 PM

Jack, out on the porch the sound of the birds, coyotes, and other nature sounds are very real early in the morn with the sounds made by man like the sound of tires on a wet pavement. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2020 9:59:00 AM

This is very nice. The description of that quiet time with only the sound of the doves!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2020 2:36:00 PM

Andrea, You have a way with words to lift a person's spirits. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/25/2020 2:38:00 PM

So peaceful. What a serene blanket of words, very beautiful and comforting.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2020 2:36:00 PM

Betty, Early morn is a wonderful time to enjoy. I hope that you get your time alone to enjoy nature. Your presence at my work is uplifting. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/25/2020 10:55:00 AM

Love the descriptive -- I think that, what we see in nature gives us a deeper, clearer window into ourselves. Great work, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2020 2:17:00 PM

Joe, Nature does help me to dig deeper into my core. Your comment was very helpful. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/23/2020 9:04:00 AM

A beautiful write/poem with a beautiful picture. Enjoy your day..........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2020 10:12:00 AM

Paula, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2020 7:36:00 AM

- A beautiful and special moment, Sara - Luck in the contest :) - Thank you very much for your comments on my poem "You Are The Giver" a pleasure to read your words about love :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2020 8:34:00 AM

SS, Thanks for the visit to my page. I love the minutes out on the porch in early morn where I can write my thoughts down. It is not happening very much anymore. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/22/2020 1:30:00 PM

They do indeed and beautifully; I enjoyed this piece.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2020 2:53:00 AM

M.L., Thanks for the awesome comment. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/22/2020 7:40:00 AM

The atmospheric imagery is superb and intriguing, Sara. My imagination is captivated by your clever last line.. Beautiful! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2020 8:16:00 AM

Susan, Your comments are uplifting. It was too early in the spring for those bees to be humming around every blossom. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara