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Morning Dew Ball

The Dew Ball Early in the morning I rise and make a cup of tea, The windows are covered with dew, nothing I can see. I step onto my deck to let my dog have a run outside, There’s a gallery of art exhibits awaiting for me to imbibe. Spiderwebs painted with dew dressed in shimmering glass, Droplets glisten on petals, at this moment beauty is on mass. Water hangs tenuously from the tips of cacti standing tall, Harmony of colour serenades my soul, it’s my morning dew ball, Within a short time my ball starts to disappear from sight, The sun rises higher and the yard slowly loses it’s delight. Like Cinderella and her glass slipper, only a few traces remain, I close my door, retreat inside, if lucky tomorrow I’ll see the same. September 10, 2011 For Paula Swanson’s Contest “How Due You Dew” Won 5th Place

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Date: 9/18/2011 4:16:00 AM
Lee-This one is a new favorite for me. I love the images described and the anticipation of seeing it all over again "if lucky tomorrow"....that's what God had in mind! Phenomenal write! All the best to you, poet! Gwendolen
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/18/2011 11:27:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words Gwendolen. Lee
Date: 9/17/2011 12:23:00 AM
Congrats Lee on another outstanding win for excellent poetry luv..
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Linda-Marie,much appreciated. Lee
Date: 9/16/2011 5:12:00 PM
Beautiful! It reminded me of a poem I wrote about shadows.But I love that morning dew sight. :-) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/16/2011 5:49:00 PM
Its funny it must have been yours that I read and thought, it reminds of this one I wrote... great minds think alike. Appreciate your comments. Love your work too. Lee
Date: 9/16/2011 1:42:00 AM
the little girl picture of the morning dew, the realm of faeries it will do... entertaining here!
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/16/2011 10:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Don. Lee
Date: 9/15/2011 11:35:00 PM
A beautiful description of a dew covered morning. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:48:00 PM
Hey congratulations. HOw interesting to compare the dew to a Cinderella ball. Very unique and a deserved win! Luv, Andrea
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/15/2011 11:13:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, greatly appreciated. I always try to write something a little different, so do you! Have a nice night. Take care lee
Date: 9/14/2011 3:34:00 AM
a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win, lee! :) huggs
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/14/2011 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I really enjoyed this one, its very peaceful where I live. Thanks Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!-------Lori
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Lori. Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations Lee on your win with this beautiful poem.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 11:26:00 AM
CONGRATS LEE ON YOUR BIG WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:52:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda-Marie. Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 10:26:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:53:00 PM
no need to apologize, there have been a great deal of contests lately with lots of results. Thank you so much for taking the time to comments. Its greatly appreciated. Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 9:43:00 AM
Spiderwebs painted with dew dressed in simmering glass - a massive verse. Congrats on your win :)
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, it should have read shimmering glass, I made a typo, have corrected, but thank you so much. Love lee
Date: 9/13/2011 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Lee. Love,Carol
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:55:00 PM
Thanks so much. Lee
Date: 9/13/2011 4:05:00 AM
hey Lee congrats on your win, sounds wonderful..David
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/13/2011 9:51:00 PM
Thanks David. Lee
Date: 9/11/2011 9:35:00 AM
Today a truth I leave here for you. I wish I had fancy words to write a comment to you but I don't. I did enjoy reading your poetry Lee. If I did not enjoy reading your poetry you would not be reading this now. I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/11/2011 12:17:00 PM
Oh I should have added its all "grateful". Love lee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/11/2011 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Carol, I hope you enjoy my poem for your contest, it is my most important "piece of paper- my list". Take care have a great weekend. Lee
Date: 9/10/2011 3:31:00 PM
Very clever Lee! Good luck as Paula judges...CR
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/10/2011 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much, I am becoming contest worn, not as creative, maybe should sit some out now. What about you? Lee

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