Morning Dew

Early rising sun, Water streaming down the spine; Of the laced green leaf.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sheart Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 10:44 AM
A amazing poem. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
Moreno Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Justin, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Justin, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Mason Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:53 AM
Beautifully done, Justin. Shows much thought given to each word in this excellent haiku!! This is a very well-deserved poem to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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June 27, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Tidy Haiku Justin, congrats>>James
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Justin. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 10:01 AM
Congrats Justin on your haiku being featured. Vince
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 5:43 PM
i love this haiku
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June 23, 2009 at 1:38 PM
Very nice short poem. Cangratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando
Jordan Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Justin - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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May 28, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Awesome imagery. "The spine of a leaf" brilliant. ~Des Juan
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May 27, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Post-rain visions; peaceful, like a moment of starting life =) thanks for the experience C=
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May 24, 2009 at 10:30 AM
i loveee it haha the last line is craziiii cool haha check ur soup mail!=]]TinkBabyy
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May 19, 2009 at 2:55 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a creative view. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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May 19, 2009 at 9:41 AM
Monumental talent here ... thanks for your comments ... let me encourage that you cultivate this dedication to the greatest precision.
Neal Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:19 PM
Lovely imagery Justin, I'm adding you to my favorite poet's list. Love E.
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May 18, 2009 at 8:19 AM
hm.. "of the laced green leaf",is quite a great way to creating imagery
Neal Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 10:06 PM
Fabulous work, love the image you paint in words. DN
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May 17, 2009 at 8:39 PM
Instant imagery! Beautiful. -Alley
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May 17, 2009 at 7:22 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Justin. I love the image of the water on the leaf. Never thought of it as a "spine" before, but truly it is when you hold a leaf up to the light. So nice to have you aboard! Love, Carolyn
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May 17, 2009 at 1:31 PM
I love this form of poetry. the last line is my favorite... good job. welcome to the soup hope you find this site welcoming.
Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 10:56 PM
Beautiful poem Justin, James
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May 16, 2009 at 8:19 PM
Beautiful image, Welcome to Poetry Soup, I love morning sessions, I sit and paint a picture with words as an artist does on canvas...Raul
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