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Morning Dew

 Early rising sun,
Water streaming down the spine;
 Of the laced green leaf.

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P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 10:44:00 AM

A amazing poem. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/2/2009 12:33:00 PM

Justin, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

Date: 9/25/2009 7:00:00 PM

Justin, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Sue Mason

Date: 6/27/2009 10:53:00 AM

Beautifully done, Justin. Shows much thought given to each word in this excellent haiku!! This is a very well-deserved poem to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!

James Fraser

Date: 6/27/2009 6:32:00 AM

Tidy Haiku Justin, congrats>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2009 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Justin. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/25/2009 10:01:00 AM

Congrats Justin on your haiku being featured. Vince

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 6/23/2009 5:43:00 PM

i love this haiku

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/23/2009 1:38:00 PM

Very nice short poem. Cangratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/22/2009 7:48:00 AM

Justin - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ

Des Juan Richardson

Date: 5/28/2009 12:42:00 PM

Awesome imagery. "The spine of a leaf" brilliant. ~Des Juan

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/27/2009 7:37:00 PM

Post-rain visions; peaceful, like a moment of starting life =) thanks for the experience C=

Jonay Washington

Date: 5/24/2009 10:30:00 AM

i loveee it haha the last line is craziiii cool haha check ur soup mail!=]]TinkBabyy

Date: 5/19/2009 2:55:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for a creative view. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

David Smalling

Date: 5/19/2009 9:41:00 AM

Monumental talent here ... thanks for your comments ... let me encourage that you cultivate this dedication to the greatest precision.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:19:00 PM

Lovely imagery Justin, I'm adding you to my favorite poet's list. Love E.

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/18/2009 8:19:00 AM

hm.. "of the laced green leaf",is quite a great way to creating imagery

Daniel Neal

Date: 5/17/2009 10:06:00 PM

Fabulous work, love the image you paint in words. DN

Alley Poe

Date: 5/17/2009 8:39:00 PM

Instant imagery! Beautiful. -Alley

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2009 7:22:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Justin. I love the image of the water on the leaf. Never thought of it as a "spine" before, but truly it is when you hold a leaf up to the light. So nice to have you aboard! Love, Carolyn