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Morning Cremation

Morning Cremation #2 Morning Cremation Soul treading water A butterfly pinned Cruel trophy Not even under glass, discarded Exposed to what the sky can give Powdered wings, dusting lost Pulled off in a gust, dropped In the tall grass of complex dances Caught, I swing and sway, mute to questions Even I had my limit, now all gone but My quiet rage An ember set to ignite, the wind Picks up a stilled wing, I catch a thermal, a tiny fireball I'll look pretty as I tumble by though.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 5/9/2013 9:12:00 PM
Michele, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:13:00 PM
About your poem Michele: I like the pretty way you will tumble your way through. deep with a small epic look...xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:42:00 PM
Michele,, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems right now and the future. I like the enjoyment of meeting new poets and reading any new poems you may want or need feedback on. I hope the next time you are on the soup; you find the time and highly recommend your own favorite poem or your next post. You can always stop by and say hi if you like…. Thanks you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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