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Image result for pictures of a yard with big oak trees with sun coming up Written by inspiration of Joanna Daniel's contest Write a tercet about nature or love. 9 Syllables per line as per How Many Syllables site. 06/24/2025 corrected 06/25/26

Morning Comes and Quickly Goes

Taking the dog out for a short walk On the ground and in trees birds I spy All the time to God my Savior talk Then the mockingbird called from the tree A crow's caw was his short, sweet white lie As morn's dew clung to spider's web free. I then was 'neath oak's shadows that sway Morn's light spread damp dew's diamonds awry Daylight has awakened, thanked God, prays As those clouds drift 'pon summer morn's start Barn swallows weave patterns in the sky Those bees 'mong purple cone flowers dart Now a whip-poor-will sings light away Thinking of you my eyes tear, I sigh Then clear sunset ends another day I'm thankful for these precious moments, Each step that I take before I die Sunshine, rain, surviving these last months
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Crandall Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:19 PM
That sounds like a wonderful walk for you and your dog! ...and congratulations on your winning poem!
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 4:46 AM
Thank you, David. I appreciate the kind review and you saying congratulations. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 2:34 AM
Congratulations on your success, Sara. I’m delighted for you. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Howard, for dropping by with such a nice comment and congratulations. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Beautifully crafted work with fantastic layers of imagery. Congratulations on your contest win, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 5:14 AM
I appreciate you dropping by, Lasaad, with such a nice review and congrats. Sara K.
Daniel Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 11:55 PM
Lovely writing, Sara, congratulations:)
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 5:17 AM
I appreciate you going the extra mile to stop by with a personal congratulations, Joanna. Sara K.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 2:10 AM
Great poem. It's beyond me.
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:27 AM
Oh, no, not beyond you, Victor. Thank you for the nice review. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 1:31 AM
Observant scene portayal and superb rhyming makes this work fascinating in my eyes. A most enjoyable read. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:26 AM
I'm delighted you enjoyed reading it, Howard. Thank you, Sara K.
George Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 9:36 PM
Day comes and goes so fast. We have happy experiences and sad ones before us. Whether happy or sad, we have to be thankful for everything that meets our eye. A beautiful Tercet, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:25 AM
I appreciate the compliment and uplifting words about my work, Valsa. Yes, the days seem to fly by these days. It seems time gets shorter as I get older. Sara K.
Rolland Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 5:19 PM
this is very emotional, music of the poem is magical , enjoyed a lot
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:24 AM
Yann, I am delighted you enjoyed reading it. Sara K.
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