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Morning Breath

A rose-laden climber bows to the morning sunlight. I inhale the sweet fragrance of damask delight and Monday fades to sensory ecstasy. The only way to begin a day.
Bite Size Poem Contes Line Gauthier 5-31-2022

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Date: 6/9/2022 9:15:00 PM
Gorgeous ML If I had emojis here I would use the clapping one.
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Date: 6/2/2022 8:03:00 PM
what a splendid beginning to a day and this poem is splendidly short and sweet.
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Date: 6/1/2022 9:58:00 AM
Roses are beautiful in the ground, climbing or in a pot, I thoroughly enjoyed the sensual connotation of nature in this lovely poem. So cleverly penned! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/1/2022 1:21:00 PM
Many thanks Jennifer.
Date: 5/31/2022 5:12:00 PM
Well, I have another way to start the day -- but yours is SO much better. Hands down! Smiles, Gershon
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/1/2022 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, it's wonderful.
Date: 5/31/2022 12:41:00 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser, yes it is a nice way to begin the day. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2022 10:50:00 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2022 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 5/31/2022 11:22:00 AM
I would rather smell a woman first thing in the morning, and flowers after baked bread, but enjoyed your poem! Aloha!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2022 4:54:00 PM
Baked bread...yum. Thanks.
Date: 5/31/2022 10:13:00 AM
Oh I totally agree. Well done. Love it. God Bless, JB
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2022 4:54:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.
Date: 5/31/2022 8:46:00 AM
Nicely written,
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2022 4:55:00 PM
Thanks Victor.
Date: 5/31/2022 8:16:00 AM
Sounds like a perfect morning to me, too.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2022 4:55:00 PM
It always is. Thanks Jenna.

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