Morning Breath

A rose-laden climber bows to the morning sunlight. I inhale the sweet fragrance of damask delight and Monday fades to sensory ecstasy. The only way to begin a day.
Bite Size Poem Contes Line Gauthier 5-31-2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 9:15 PM
Gorgeous ML If I had emojis here I would use the clapping one.
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:03 PM
what a splendid beginning to a day and this poem is splendidly short and sweet.
Proxenos Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Roses are beautiful in the ground, climbing or in a pot, I thoroughly enjoyed the sensual connotation of nature in this lovely poem. So cleverly penned! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:21 PM
Many thanks Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 5:12 PM
Well, I have another way to start the day -- but yours is SO much better. Hands down! Smiles, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:21 PM
Thanks Gershon, it's wonderful.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser, yes it is a nice way to begin the day. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Kiser Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Leffanta Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 11:22 AM
I would rather smell a woman first thing in the morning, and flowers after baked bread, but enjoyed your poem! Aloha!
Kiser Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Baked bread...yum. Thanks.
Ball Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Oh I totally agree. Well done. Love it. God Bless, JB
Kiser Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Nicely written,
Kiser Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Thanks Victor.
Logan Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Sounds like a perfect morning to me, too.
Kiser Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:55 PM
It always is. Thanks Jenna.
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