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Morning Apparition

MORNING APPARITION midnight moonlight sunlight rewrite * * * * * * smooth pen, under midnight moonlight, breathes. dust diaspora in sunlight — rewrite seethes. 1/24/2018

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/25/2018 5:19:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous, Kim, (and I love the layout! I've yet to learn to be creative with such ... you are a master!), with such exquisite imagery and story in such few words ... love it! I may attempt this form ... I'm trying to motivate myself to get my toes wet, (I wonder if the water's chilly, lol?). Thank you for this wonderful example! :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2018 8:07:00 AM

Thanks so much, Greg! I enjoy writing brevity poems! Hugs...Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2018 11:56:00 PM

this tyburn turned out very smooth and poetic. So hard to accomplish with this form!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2018 8:06:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim