Morning

Look…a new day has begun!
Full of hope, the sky,
In his pastel morning gown,
Watches blackbirds fly
From their sleeping place,
Waits for Sun to wake and shine
On her lover’s face.

9/14/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Lovely, Agnes.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:36 AM
Congrats on your win :)
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:28 AM
Agnes - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
Paul Hempstone Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 1:26 AM
Beautiful!Congrats Agnes!
Canerdy Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Lovely, WINNING poem, Agnes! Janice
La France Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Agnes, I love your dreamy write, CONGRATULATIONS!
Cozart Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Congrats on your win, Agnes!
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:10 PM
I just adore this! Which picture were you using? I believe you were supposed to call the title Seguidilla followed by picture number. (I may be wrong about that) But if you go see mine, that will be the way I understood her directions to read.
Krampe Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:34 PM
Oh, I see - just looked up the instructions again - thanks for pointing out that we need to use Seguidilla in the title. I totally missed that. Poem is renamed now, I hope she still accepts it.
Krampe Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:10 PM
I thought we were supposed to incorporate a *phrase*? I don't recall seeing a picture.
One Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Lovely imagery..
Michaels Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Lovely imagery, Agnes!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:37 PM
- Beautifully written, Agnes - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Pandit Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Lovely romantic poem!
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:37 AM
such lovely imagery Agnes i love the pastel morning gown line that is delightful:-) good luck in the contest:-0 hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 5:54 PM
I'm just grateful to wake up in the morning Agnes!!:-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Jan. I am a morning person and love being able to watch the sunrise.
Capitano Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Love the ending Agnes, good luck in the contest and good morning too.
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Thanks, Phil- good morning to you, too.
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