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Morning

Look…a new day has begun!
Full of hope, the sky,
In his pastel morning gown,
Watches blackbirds fly
From their sleeping place,
Waits for Sun to wake and shine
On her lover’s face.

9/14/2017

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Date: 9/17/2018 1:19:00 PM
Lovely, Agnes.
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Date: 10/9/2017 6:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:28:00 AM
Agnes - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Date: 10/8/2017 1:26:00 AM
Beautiful!Congrats Agnes!
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:47:00 PM
Lovely, WINNING poem, Agnes! Janice
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:59:00 PM
Agnes, I love your dreamy write, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Agnes!
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Date: 9/19/2017 7:10:00 PM
I just adore this! Which picture were you using? I believe you were supposed to call the title Seguidilla followed by picture number. (I may be wrong about that) But if you go see mine, that will be the way I understood her directions to read.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/19/2017 8:34:00 PM
Oh, I see - just looked up the instructions again - thanks for pointing out that we need to use Seguidilla in the title. I totally missed that. Poem is renamed now, I hope she still accepts it.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/19/2017 8:10:00 PM
I thought we were supposed to incorporate a *phrase*? I don't recall seeing a picture.
Date: 9/18/2017 4:03:00 PM
Lovely imagery..
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Date: 9/16/2017 9:22:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Agnes!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:09:00 PM
There is a hopeful feeling in this well written poem, Agnes! I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 5:38:00 PM
THank you, Carol
Date: 9/14/2017 1:37:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Agnes - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/14/2017 1:09:00 PM
Lovely romantic poem!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 9/14/2017 8:37:00 AM
such lovely imagery Agnes i love the pastel morning gown line that is delightful:-) good luck in the contest:-0 hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/14/2017 5:54:00 PM
I'm just grateful to wake up in the morning Agnes!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I am a morning person and love being able to watch the sunrise.
Date: 9/14/2017 7:53:00 AM
Love the ending Agnes, good luck in the contest and good morning too.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thanks, Phil- good morning to you, too.