my poor attempt at rhyme
*************************************************
The cockcrow heralded the first flush of the day. I woke up spirited The sun gave its first ray. Low clouds spun in a whirl A breeze blew steadily All became white as pearl. Sky became heavenly. I grabbed something for food I walked the narrow street Checkered Bougainvillea viewed They all bloomed in the heat.
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
