Morning

as the sun awakes morning explodes with color— the stars fall asleep

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Date: 1/1/2024 10:45:00 PM

This is a peaceful way to start a day, with stars falling asleep. I like it, Jerry. Nice Haiku, my friend. Bill

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:31:00 PM

A little coffee and a little sunshine...can't get any better.

Date: 1/1/2024 10:05:00 PM

I'm an early riser and never get tired of seeing the sunrise. Happy New year to you Jerry. Tom

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:32:00 PM

Early to bed and early to rise, makes a person healthy and wise... so the man said.

Date: 1/1/2024 5:25:00 AM

oooo! I like this Haiku...a delightful image. Thanks for sharing & have a great Monday, Sara

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:37:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. Have a fantastic evening, my friend.

Date: 1/1/2024 4:34:00 AM

The imagery in this haiku is breathtaking! I can vividly picture the vibrant morning colours and the subtle, quiet departure of the stars...

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:38:00 PM

I refer to it as the coffee hour.

Date: 1/1/2024 4:29:00 AM

Awww so sweet and lovely! Debx

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:40:00 PM

Each moment is a great moment to be alive, but a glorious sunrise is so inspiring for me.