Morning

       as the sun awakes
morning explodes with color—
      the stars fall asleep
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Baker Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 10:45 PM
This is a peaceful way to start a day, with stars falling asleep. I like it, Jerry. Nice Haiku, my friend. Bill
Brotherton Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:31 PM
A little coffee and a little sunshine...can't get any better.
Cunningham Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 10:05 PM
I'm an early riser and never get tired of seeing the sunrise. Happy New year to you Jerry. Tom
Brotherton Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Early to bed and early to rise, makes a person healthy and wise... so the man said.
One Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 4:34 AM
The imagery in this haiku is breathtaking! I can vividly picture the vibrant morning colours and the subtle, quiet departure of the stars...
Brotherton Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 5:38 PM
I refer to it as the coffee hour.
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January 1, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Awww so sweet and lovely! Debx
Brotherton Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Each moment is a great moment to be alive, but a glorious sunrise is so inspiring for me.
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