Morgana

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Morgana is arrogant and frosty, difficult to like She comes wearing armor said enemy, headdress a spike Her unicorn will be wearing a floral cape of course Way too pretty to be mixed up for any common everyday horse Morgana is ruthless, all enemies better be alert and beware. With her own people, however, she shows incredible care. I was tired of what this stranger was saying about my sister that day. So I got my sword out and banished him swiftly away.

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/23/2022 8:26:00 AM

Wonderful ekphrasis, Caren. I kept reading and looking at the picture, which I think would be intended. Lovely painting; marvelous description; fine story!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/23/2022 11:42:00 AM

Well, get 'er done. You're not going to get any younger, you know!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/23/2022 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Hank. I may be ready to start thinking about my LULU book now - my own paintings with a matching poem. Joe has been BEGGING me to do this for years.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/23/2022 3:15:00 AM

Looks like he also added good points about Morgana!! But he had to get banished!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/23/2022 4:26:00 AM

I almost cut his head off at the end, but thought it would seem too mean.