Morel Hides Behind Moss

hunters savagely ravage forest floor
diligent thorough searching
Morel hides behind moss

Written 3-22-2019
Contest: Kimo
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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La France Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Caren, congratulations on your win in my contest. I have to admit that I had to look up the word morel and was surprised to find out it is a mushroom. What a lovely poem!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 5:32 PM
Thank you Constance; I guess because I live in the midwest US, I had wrongly assumed everyone would know morel like we do. They make YUMMY eating - cut in half, and fried in tasty crumbs, dipped in ketchup.
Bangalee Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 4:07 AM
morel behind the moss cannot save itself from the hunter savagery!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 4:39 AM
My point exactly, but I love thinking of it as "trying".
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 8:02 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I love morels, and the forest, and I am so frightened of all kinds of hunters.
Onclaud Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 4:37 PM
may we treat nature kindly...powerful work, caren... huggs
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 4:06 AM
Thank you Nette. I have watched the mushroom hunters, they step on some really GREAT ones.
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:57 PM
- Morels are one of the most desired wild mushrooms in the world, Karen :) - Lovely written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 4:07 AM
I used to have them on a regular basis, fried with ketchup, when I was a child in Iowa; my Daddy and his brother loved to mushroom hunt, and I knew the smallest ones were always going to be the tastiest. Other siblings grabbed up those tasteless larger ones.
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March 22, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Nicely done. I wish you well in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Thank you Bette. I appreciate your visit.
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