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More Than Star Wars

Wish I could save the dream from last night A block buster movie, proceeds out of sight More than Star Wars My mind just soars How I'd spend my fortune, buy a country I might © Jack Ellison 2016

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Carol Eastman

Date: 1/27/2016 10:45:00 AM

Which one? I've heard they're all taken... Tho Syria may be up for grabs soon... Dragon and Grandpa Troll Think you should aim for an island instead... Then they want to come and visit... With the penguins... and the pigeons...and the 4 Turtles say they'd like to bring their yellow submarine along too... Geeze! Where did all my popularity go? Think I'm going to go back to bed and cover my head... Are do overs cool or what?... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/28/2016 8:03:00 AM

Money talks! Syria??? Are you crazy? Ooops sorry my dear Carol! xoxox